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youNg Trainee
Posts : 4 Join date : 2010-04-12
| Subject: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:05 am | |
| hi im youNg with a capitol "N" and i love editing videos. i try my best to get better and try new things. my real name is eudomar munoz and im dominican. visit my yt channel youtube.com/young3ldiie | |
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Direct Lieutenant Colonel
Posts : 401 Join date : 2010-04-11 Age : 28 Location : KSF/USF
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:31 pm | |
| You sir have some bad engrish. Althought welcome and I like your videos keep them up please also Welcome to the forums. | |
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ToTheTop Admin
Posts : 335 Join date : 2010-04-11 Age : 32 Location : Bilthoven
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:40 pm | |
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OkayHarryy Master Sargeant
Posts : 72 Join date : 2010-04-12
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:48 pm | |
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SureShot Admin
Posts : 200 Join date : 2010-04-11 Age : 30 Location : Turn around to find out.
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:27 pm | |
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- You sir have some bad engrish. Althought welcome and I like your videos keep them up please also Welcome to the forums.
Add commas and dots when writing. It's spelt ''although'', not althought, and it doesn't come after a period. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' Word order is important when writing sentences. ''keep them up please'' To keep ''it'' up is an expression and a fixed combination, it cannot be changed. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' No capital letter on the W, ''and'', is that the 5th or the 6th time you said ''and'' in your sentence? As I said, add more periods and commas. I won't even comment on that ridiculous smiley whereas there's a box of smileys right next to your comment. Try to learn English yourself before you try to correct others. | |
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OkayHarryy Master Sargeant
Posts : 72 Join date : 2010-04-12
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:29 pm | |
| - SureShot wrote:
- Direct wrote:
- You sir have some bad engrish. Althought welcome and I like your videos keep them up please also Welcome to the forums.
Add commas and dots when writing. It's spelt ''although'', not althought, and it doesn't come after a period. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' Word order is important when writing sentences. ''keep them up please'' To keep ''it'' up is an expression and a fixed combination, it cannot be changed. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' No capital letter on the W, ''and'', is that the 5th or the 6th time you said ''and'' in your sentence? As I said, add more periods and commas. I won't even comment on that ridiculous smiley whereas there's a box of smileys right next to your comment.
Try to learn English yourself before you try to correct others. Rofl | |
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Direct Lieutenant Colonel
Posts : 401 Join date : 2010-04-11 Age : 28 Location : KSF/USF
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:05 pm | |
| - SureShot wrote:
- Direct wrote:
- You sir have some bad engrish. Althought welcome and I like your videos keep them up please also Welcome to the forums.
Add commas and dots when writing. It's spelt ''although'', not althought, and it doesn't come after a period. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' Word order is important when writing sentences. ''keep them up please'' To keep ''it'' up is an expression and a fixed combination, it cannot be changed. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' No capital letter on the W, ''and'', is that the 5th or the 6th time you said ''and'' in your sentence? As I said, add more periods and commas. I won't even comment on that ridiculous smiley whereas there's a box of smileys right next to your comment.
Try to learn English yourself before you try to correct others. Sir, I was not trying to use proper English as I was in a hurry because I was watching my brother. If you would like me to use proper English I will. Your sentence structure on some sentences are kinda off. | |
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youNg Trainee
Posts : 4 Join date : 2010-04-12
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:58 pm | |
| - SureShot wrote:
- Direct wrote:
- You sir have some bad engrish. Althought welcome and I like your videos keep them up please also Welcome to the forums.
Add commas and dots when writing. It's spelt ''although'', not althought, and it doesn't come after a period. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' Word order is important when writing sentences. ''keep them up please'' To keep ''it'' up is an expression and a fixed combination, it cannot be changed. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' No capital letter on the W, ''and'', is that the 5th or the 6th time you said ''and'' in your sentence? As I said, add more periods and commas. I won't even comment on that ridiculous smiley whereas there's a box of smileys right next to your comment.
Try to learn English yourself before you try to correct others. I DONT WRITE SENTECES ON THE NET. I AM NOT A GOOD SPELLER BUT THE NET IS THE ONLY PLACE WHERE I DONT CHECK CAUSE NO1 RLLY CARES..... HI SURESHOT =] | |
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SureShot Admin
Posts : 200 Join date : 2010-04-11 Age : 30 Location : Turn around to find out.
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:01 am | |
| - youNg wrote:
- SureShot wrote:
- Direct wrote:
- You sir have some bad engrish. Althought welcome and I like your videos keep them up please also Welcome to the forums.
Add commas and dots when writing. It's spelt ''although'', not althought, and it doesn't come after a period. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' Word order is important when writing sentences. ''keep them up please'' To keep ''it'' up is an expression and a fixed combination, it cannot be changed. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' No capital letter on the W, ''and'', is that the 5th or the 6th time you said ''and'' in your sentence? As I said, add more periods and commas. I won't even comment on that ridiculous smiley whereas there's a box of smileys right next to your comment.
Try to learn English yourself before you try to correct others. I DONT WRITE SENTECES ON THE NET. I AM NOT A GOOD SPELLER BUT THE NET IS THE ONLY PLACE WHERE I DONT CHECK CAUSE NO1 RLLY CARES..... HI SURESHOT =] I care. I bought an iCare yesterday, I got a 3 killstreak with hardline and called in a Care Package, and my Care Cup is still full to the brim. | |
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Direct Lieutenant Colonel
Posts : 401 Join date : 2010-04-11 Age : 28 Location : KSF/USF
| Subject: Re: hi. i am the the young grasshoppa Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:28 pm | |
| - SureShot wrote:
- youNg wrote:
- SureShot wrote:
- Direct wrote:
- You sir have some bad engrish. Althought welcome and I like your videos keep them up please also Welcome to the forums.
Add commas and dots when writing. It's spelt ''although'', not althought, and it doesn't come after a period. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' Word order is important when writing sentences. ''keep them up please'' To keep ''it'' up is an expression and a fixed combination, it cannot be changed. ''Welcome and I like your videos'' No capital letter on the W, ''and'', is that the 5th or the 6th time you said ''and'' in your sentence? As I said, add more periods and commas. I won't even comment on that ridiculous smiley whereas there's a box of smileys right next to your comment.
Try to learn English yourself before you try to correct others. I DONT WRITE SENTECES ON THE NET. I AM NOT A GOOD SPELLER BUT THE NET IS THE ONLY PLACE WHERE I DONT CHECK CAUSE NO1 RLLY CARES..... HI SURESHOT =] I care. I bought an iCare yesterday, I got a 3 killstreak with hardline and called in a Care Package, and my Care Cup is still full to the brim. My Care Bag beats your bought iCare Care Package. Also your Care Cup is too small to fit my size. | |
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